Colour & Composition week 10

This week we critiqued our latest work.  I am so far behind in painting!  I have so much to learn.  The teacher asked me how I felt about mine and I said it looks unfinished.  Yes.  And such a limited palette.  This one was pretty much a failure.  Set it aside.  Our last project is chiaroscuro.  We did a still life at school.  We were also told how to put a glaze on top -- so I have mine before and after glazing.  (Didn't seem to make much difference.)  For next week the same again -- a photo to paint and then critique on the last week.